AIS Language Arts
"A small stream playing a melodious tune of winter sounds." I like it because it is very descriptive. Anh
"Their song was like a lullaby." This has been written by my best friend, Pearl. She was really good at grammar then. I like this sentence because it had a brilliant grammar and a good personification. It was also very descriptive, too. Kathy
Locked, tied down in a dark kitchen at midnight, the rough chair clinging on tighter to my body
"a small stream playing a melodious of winter sound." I like this quote from Anh's personification poem because it give us the ideas that the sound of the stream was very smooth and quiet. Good job, Anh, I really admire your poem.
"The air conditioner is blowing comfortable air for the friendly people sleeping."
"The rough chair clinging on tighter to my body." I really liked this because it is descriptive
"the trees screamed as the wind blew in the gloomy night". I really liked this personification sentence because it is descriptive and creative
"Seeing the luminous moon prance with my naked eyes." I really liked this sentence because it is very descriptive and it has a good personification. And this been written by Diana 6C.
"Above the dancing trees shines down a shimmering star." This had been written by Diana 6C. I liked this sentence because it is very descriptive and we could imagine this picture clearly in our minds.
Chocolate is a masterpiece that came from nature .....
"Milk pouring down like waterfall" I really like this sentence because its descriptive how the pouring milk is compared to a waterfall.~Celine 6C~
I have friend named Lisa. Her mouth always yapping out loud.
The trees put on new dresses.
The engine coughed and screamed